Comments on: Would anyone please read my short story and give me reviews?

By: Jyotika

Jyotika — Thu, 23 Jul 2009 02:34:55 +0000

lol, wtf? That was…interesting. Nice lol

The Duck — Thu, 23 Jul 2009 02:34:55 +0000

Yay?
Slightly interesting parody…

Hatshepsut — Thu, 23 Jul 2009 02:34:55 +0000

I’m afraid the term "short story" does not apply here. It’s more of a rant. And a damn funny one at that!

<3Emm — Thu, 23 Jul 2009 02:34:55 +0000

Lmao